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. : MMD : . Hello, Good Night Miku -Download- by Pachiimeru . : MMD : . Hello, Good Night Miku -Download- by Pachiimeru
She don't have some expensive faciais, or a great rig, it's a really
simple model, i spend a long time making she, but in proud of her result,
so i wanted to put up for download, have fun~ >www<



-Rules:

:bulletred:Credit me, please, it's not necessary credit 1000000000 times, only one it's good.
:bulletgreen:Don't use for R-18 or Pervert thing whet, i don't want nothing about that with my model~
:bulletred:Not for commercial use plz, don't sell prints using she....
:bulletgreen:Edit is not allowed, please, respect, i an working hard to make that model the better for you's pals~
:bulletred:Don't redistribute she, if you want, give the link for here~
:bulletgreen:Thank you for download she !!!!

Download is on the right, aka deviantart download button --->



. : Credits : .

-Model made by me
-Clothes idea and original side by Sega(c), PDF
-Original Model by Animasa
-Base by Kanimasa
-Clothes original by mitsuru-aga
-Antenna, Leg Bracelet & Hair accessory modeled by me
-Collar by Atakinomon
-Hair acessory tex by cookiesempai
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:iconyuuu-chan:
Let's do this xD
This'll be a quite detailed critique of the model so it's a bit long |3

Appearance
Overall, for an Animasa model, it looks great, pretty accurate from the module it's based on. The preview picture/pose is great as well~ The transparency on the hair was a nice touch, a very nice touch. The spa on the box thingies on her hair gives it an effect to shimmer when the camera (in MMD) is moved and that's pretty nice. The textures are made well, too.
I think it's just me but I find the white part of her clothes too bright or something. It matches with MMD's default background color making it too bright for those who have weak eyes. But I think you shouldn't be too bothered about this~

Bones
Clean. Very clean I must say. This goes the same for the invisible bones. The bone groups are very well maintained and there's no unregistered bone. The only fault is the order of bone groups because the "Center" group is at the very end. It should be at the top, but it's not much of a bother.

Physics and Joints
Clean as well. The only thing that's bothering me is the lack of skirt physics. But I understand why it doesn't have any so I guess it's okay~

Miscellaneous Stuff (Rigging, Materials, and Objects)
Screenshots included
Rigging is okay. The shoulder rigging is quite rough but it's not that noticeable.
The rigging on the skirt is okay as well but this maybe a problem -> sta.sh/01lzvr2jdn9a
The objects aren't merged very well. The spa shows the flaws -> sta.sh/027t9v1ie8z1
Finally, I found a disadvantage with the transparent hair when self-shadow's off -> sta.sh/01arbjo1mrkb
Also, some of the model's material names are the same which may cause some problems in the future.

Overall, it's a great model and recommended to Animasa model collectors. Can be used for pictures but has a disadvantage for videos.

There are some things I didn't mention 'cause I only focused on those things~
This is just a critique, please don't let it affect you too much :3

I hope this helps youuu <3
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:iconpickles-desu:
Pickles-desu Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SO MUCH THANKS <33333333 ;A;A;A;
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:iconpickles-desu:
Pickles-desu Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
you stop ( 6 - 6 )
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:iconpickles-desu:
Pickles-desu Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
downloaded it ~*~*
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thankyu~
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:iconjoseph-esapa:
joseph-esapa Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Aww you did a great job on her :D
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank uuuuu <33333
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:iconjoseph-esapa:
joseph-esapa Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
you're welcome <333
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:iconalp-eca:
alp-eca Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
downloaded! <3
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank you <3
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:iconalp-eca:
alp-eca Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
no problem! your model is so cute!~ 
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:iconshaka-yo:
Shaka-yo Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
She is so cute ^^

Amazing job ^^
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Valeu <3333
sou br tio~
toca aq
//hi5
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:iconshaka-yo:
Shaka-yo Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
>.<

Gosto das suas edits, fico de olho nas q ñ posto ainda XD

Você faz um ótimo trabalho ^^

não foi nada ^^

Brs fasendo festa no da XD
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ain valeu ;A;

sou aquele tio do grupo mmd br
que não postou mais nada -Q
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:iconshaka-yo:
Shaka-yo Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
XD
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:iconmmdcutiecookies:
mmdcutiecookies Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I've downloaded!
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank yoooooooou <33333
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:icongingerrattennaxd:
GingerrattennaXD Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
downloaded <3
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank yuuuuuuuu <<<<3333333
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:iconvocaloidsfan:
vocaloidsfan Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 hair transparency is awesome!
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks <3333
i had this idea watching some videos, it's just like anime's characters, they have transparency hair ^^
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:iconvocaloidsfan:
vocaloidsfan Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I luv u
I luv anime
I luv transparancy hair
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
OMGGGGG
SOMEONE LOVES ME

wait
i have a girlfriend
but in still a shota
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:iconvocaloidsfan:
vocaloidsfan Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dun worry
i luv shota boys
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i have a girlfriend
//heart-shock
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:iconvocaloidsfan:
vocaloidsfan Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is it Miku? :iconrinishappyplz:
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NOU -Q
it's vocaloidxmmdmiku
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:iconatakinomon:
Atakinomon Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
o colar não fui eu que fiz kk foi meu irmão kkk
:iconokumurain12: / :iconkaichi88: kkk
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
omg mas to sem motivação para mudar
#depressivo
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:iconatakinomon:
Atakinomon Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
kkk 
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:iconvocaloidsfan:
vocaloidsfan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dudddeeeeeee look at her style :'D
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
is it good ? <3
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:iconvocaloidsfan:
vocaloidsfan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is good for a animasa edit! <3
But in my opinion,you should add more spa and toons or stuff like that to make her more perfect <3
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
she's complete with spa's and toons i can't add more
and it will be to much bright if i put so much
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:iconvocaloidsfan:
vocaloidsfan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh okay then :D
too bad I wont use her in anything though... ._.
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh okay lol
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:iconhajaribrahim23:
hajaribrahim23 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It was amazing :D
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thaaaaaanks <3333
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:iconhajaribrahim23:
hajaribrahim23 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You talented, :D
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks ;----;
really thanks <333333
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:iconhajaribrahim23:
hajaribrahim23 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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:iconiadzxenon:
IadzXenon Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Pretty indeed!
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconyuuu-chan:
Yuuu-chan Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Awesome! Thank you for the DL~ <3

Heyy, is it okay if I post a critique about the model ?
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
welcome senpaaai <333

how you want, critiques help me to make my models better
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:iconyuuu-chan:
Yuuu-chan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
<3

Alrighty~ I'll inspect the model and write a review about it :3
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:iconpachiimeru:
Pachiimeru Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
arigatooo <3
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